Thursday, December 2, 2010

MISSION #2 GRADE

First thing's first, let's see if HilMF met all of the requirements of assignment.


1 - A queen...................................YES
2 - Broken Telephone.....................YES
3 - The phrase "I Saved the Day"....YES


THEME: Travel.............................YES


Now We will grade her on the use of each of the requirements.


1 - A+ Excellent! I think it really set the tone of the song!
2 - A- Great.  Good use however I was hoping it would get a little more in depth.
3 - A Great! Me likey a lot! I heard it in my head and it sounded nice!


Now on to THEME.  For this I give you a B- minus.  It felt a bit more like war then travel however I still liked it and thought it made sense, carried all the way through and had a great rhythm.


Overall my grade to you is A!

Excellent job, I loved the song and want to hear it for real!!! Stay tuned for your next mission!



- Schlitz

1 comment:

  1. I'm looking forward to hearing the recording. I think it should probably be a duo. : )

    Miss you guys!!!

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