First thing's first, let's see if HilMF met all of the requirements of assignment.
1 - A queen...................................YES
2 - Broken Telephone.....................YES
3 - The phrase "I Saved the Day"....YES
THEME: Travel.............................YES
Now We will grade her on the use of each of the requirements.
1 - A+ Excellent! I think it really set the tone of the song!
2 - A- Great. Good use however I was hoping it would get a little more in depth.
3 - A Great! Me likey a lot! I heard it in my head and it sounded nice!
Now on to THEME. For this I give you a B- minus. It felt a bit more like war then travel however I still liked it and thought it made sense, carried all the way through and had a great rhythm.
Overall my grade to you is A!
Excellent job, I loved the song and want to hear it for real!!! Stay tuned for your next mission!
- Schlitz
I'm looking forward to hearing the recording. I think it should probably be a duo. : )
ReplyDeleteMiss you guys!!!