First thing's first, let's see if HilMF met all of the requirements of assignment.
1 - A dog named Bubs............ YES
2 - A lime green Vespa........... YES
3 - A secret spy..................... YES
4 - A fire escape.................... YES
5 - 3 Russian words............... YES
Now We will grade her on the use of each of the requirements.
1 - A+ Excellent! I can picture Bubs quite clearly in my head and he quite the specimen. Bubs is truly a gentleman and a scholar. I believe this was a very creative and surprising way to use this requirement.
2 - A Great! Me likey! my only criticism would be, I had hoped it would come alive ala Herbie.
3 - A Great! She was a tad forth coming, you'd think the "I could tell you but I'd have to kill you" would be more prevalent with a spy like Izabella...LOVE the name too!
4 - A+ Excellent! I can see it, and it is scary, and scary is good.
5 - sad (park) - A
chai (tea) - B
pochtovoe otdelenie (post office) - A+
Overall my grade to you is A!
Excellent job, I loved the story and want to keep reading it!!! Stay tuned for your next mission!
- Schlitz
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